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Well kind of my first try to create something like this. Plz give comments and check out my other stuff thx

xao..

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:iconshadow86:
Ooh, I love it! Looks very... hot :D The colors are intoxicating, it looks great!! :clap:

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:iconpurpleeyedbanshee:
Oooh... purdy. Love the colors and the design, thumbs up ;)!

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:icone3rian:
first try? very nice for a first try...
You have some type problems (kerning too tight) which can be fixed easily.

Not such a big fan of the green atr the right side~ you should probably just saturate the main image - or you could get rid of that right bit anyway - no repetition could help this a lot.

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:iconlg2:
Thx for you comment. Kerning too tight? don't quite understand what you mean.
I agree with about the right part, it should probably be removed. Just some wierd idea I had.

Your the first to critisize my work, thanks I really need that. I would appreciate if you could take a look at some of my other works and tell me what you think.

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:iconlg2:
Muchas gracias, thanks!! (:

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:iconlg2:
I'm glad you like it, thanks!

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:icone3rian:
are you just confused about the term called kerning (as in not understanding what it means...)
if you are, it means the spacing between letters, since they are different shapes - the spaces between must also be different for it to be optically correct.

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:iconlg2:
Oh ok.. but I thougt that looked good.. Should I avoid that in the future? :/ hehe

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:icone3rian:
ahhh, no, but just for this one thing, because it not expresing cummer or love very well~

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